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I just wrote this poem, I was feeling inspired, but I think it kind of sucks...I was feeling inspired and all loved and stuff. Maybe somebody here will enjoy it...

A little About Love........by Me, obviously

Such a strange thing is love
It seemingly affects all aspects of our life:
Love can cause you to react differently to situations
Love will make you look at things from a different perspective
Love can make the most cynical person very understanding.
Love is also extremely varied:
You have romantic love, loving those people you knoe very intimately, those you share the most of your person with
You have familial love, loving your family
You have friendly love, loving your dear friends
You have aficionado love, loving your favorite musician/band, tv show, movie, game, et cetera
And, ultimately, there is unconditional love.
Unconditional love:
The love that conquers all obstacles, overcomes all things
What a mother feels for her children
What a person, hopefuly, feels eventually for one's significant other
The love everyone, in all walks of life, wishes to attain.
Love can also be very influential on our emotional state as well:
Love can cause greed
Love can cause pity
Love can cause spite
Love can cause strife
Love can cause happiness and laughter
Love can cause jealousy and envy
Love can cause anger
Love can cause sorrow and pain
Love can also cause hatred; you cannot truly hate someone without having loved them first.
Basically, love rules over all.

um wow thts actually a rlly good poem

Its very nice and well written

Wow. Like. That's such a good description of Love. Amzaing poem. It really flows, as i was reading it had a sort of rhythm to it. (i'm a musician.) Don't say something YOU'VE written sucks because YOU wrote it.

haha so true

Thanks guys! I'm very critical of myself sometimes, I need to learn to stop that. I'm actually working on ideas for NaNoWriMo right now too, so I'll be writing for that. I've had people ask me to write more poems, so obviously I need to stop being critical of myself. I also need to write more, apparently!